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Razor by ~stupidsongs2:iconstupidsongs2:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Transgressive > Fixed




Razor, Razor on the wall
Who cuts the cleanest of them all?
Long, deep cuts that can't be beat
Down the lane, not across the street

Who takes you tight, in my hand like so?
And with one quick flick, lets blood flow
Who desires for your cold steel?
And cuts again, as my wounds do heal

Who loves to see the blood run fast?
And watch as so-called friends run past
Who longs for your sharp blade?
And wishes that the pain not fade

Who wants to see the floor stained red?
And lie in blood upon my bed
Who begs you for a cut so deep?
That I’m plunged into forever sleep

Razor, razor on the wall
Cut my veins, please cut them all
©2004-2009 ~stupidsongs2
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Author's Comments

Think "on the wall" as in a medicine cabinet

I wrote these and the next two at 5 in the morning after cutting myself up pretty bad, so I don't wanna hear any of that crap of "that there’s no feeling"

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~fluffycritter Mar 24, 2004, 5:53:47 AM
:heart: i love this. period. i'm sorry people are shitty to people like you and me. they don't get it. fuck it.






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~crushedPorcelaindoll Mar 30, 2004, 7:36:16 PM
this is not only a lovley picture its a wonderful poem i am very impressed by it and i hope to read more of your work

hugz n kissez <3 dolly
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~TransparencesEye Apr 2, 2004, 5:45:00 AM
This one is really good too, you have skill for rhyming, it never sounds forced.
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~Tears0fBlood May 2, 2004, 7:57:20 PM
i love this is very well done i find cutting is just a part of some ppls life i do it everyday its just something i do ne ways well done
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~darknessembraced May 20, 2004, 5:14:40 PM
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"Who loves to see the blood run fast?
And watch as so-called friends run past
Who longs for your sharp blade?
And wishes that the pain not fade"

I do. Its ironic that you posted the link to this on my page today... It is 5 months today since the last time I cut. Thats the longest I've ever gone in the last five years without doing it. You wrote this quite well. I have a poem that I wrote about it too...[link]
:heart: I really like this poem. You described it perfectly.

--
They held each other and kisssed
And pushed each others'
darkness into the corner
Believing in each others' light
each others' dream.
-Hubert Selby Jr.

~.~ :blackrose: :heart: embrace the darkness :heart: :blackrose: ~.~
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~stupidsongs2 May 21, 2004, 8:00:56 AM
thank you! you've gone longer then me

--
Hot Girls for Free
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~PorcelainLies Jul 20, 2004, 10:40:41 PM
i really like this one... in fact, I'm going to fave it.
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~IXtearsofbloodXI Sep 4, 2004, 8:09:02 PM
OMG i luv the pic. and i luv the poem its really good!!!



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